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[Red Dragonette]

Here's an Advance Wars fanfic guys. Now I understand that some of you haven't played the series, but I need you guys to review this fanfic and critique it before I upload it onto Fanfiction.net.

Advance Wars New Years Eve Party

The New Years Eve Party was going on at the Orange Star HQ where it was hosted by the commanding officer, Nell. Every member of the Allied Nations was invited, so all the COs from Orange Star, Blue Moon, Yellow Comet, and Green Earth came to attended. Balloons, hangings, the wall banner that spelled ‘Happy New Year’, and the disco ball decorated the huge room. There were drinks and food on the table such as sodas, fruit punch, water, chips, hotdogs, burgers, pretzels, and all that good stuff. Even the cheerful, upbeat music played loudly throughout the whole room.

Kanbei was standing next to his lovely daughter as he drank his cup of cranberry wine. “It’s a good thing we’re staying up late till midnight to celebrate the New Year,” he said.

“And it’s also a good thing that we get to meet our old friends again,” Sonja said.

Sitting on the couch in front of the huge screen TV were Andy, Max, and Sami along with Jake, Eagle, and Drake. “Oh boy, oh boy, I can’t wait until the countdown!” said an excited Max as he held his hands on his thighs and bounced his feet up and down.

“Yeah, me too! I’m going to be the one to shout the loudest after countdown,” said Andy.

Jake blew a short raspberry and said, “Yeah right, I bet I can say ‘Happy New Year’ louder than you can. You’re getting owned on this, Andy.”

“Oh please, if anybody’s going to do the loudest shouting, it’s going to be me,” said cocky Eagle.

“Oh yeah? Well I’ve roared louder than a scared girl screaming on a megaphone. Let’s see you beat that?!” Max challenged. Sure, he was loud and maybe he can shout better than the other boys.

“Everybody shut up! The countdown’s about to start!” Sami told them.

“She’s right, we should get everybody to the TV now,” said Drake.

So all the COs went to the couches or stand by them to see the TV that was showing the giant ball about to be dropped off the top of the building. “Oh boy, here it comes! Get ready to count guys,” Rachel told them.

As soon as the countdown started, the crowd on the TV as well as the COs chanted, “10… 9… 8… 7… 6… 5… 4…”

‘It’s almost time, Andy. Get ready to scream as loudly as you can,’ the dark-haired brunette thought as he started building up his lungs for the shout.

“3…”

‘Watch out, guys! Cause you’re about to get owned,’ Jake thought as he was really sure about his win in the shouting contest with Andy, Max, and Eagle.

“2…”

‘You might as well cover your ears, because this one’s gonna make them bleed,’ Eagle thought as he looked at his competitors.

“1…”

‘This is it! It’s time to show them what you got, Max!’ thought the big muscular bluehead.

“Happy New Year!” all the COs shouted. But the loudest out of all of them were Andy, Jake, Max, and Eagle. Surprisingly, they were all on equal on terms of loudest. Much to Colin’s dismay, who had the most sensitive hearing out of the group, it was enough to make one’s eardrums hurt. But he wasn’t the only one to suffer from shout contest; Andy, Jake, Max, and Eagle were all coughing from forcing their voices to be too loud.

Jess rolled her eyes at the four of them and said, “You boys are pathetic.”

Eagle coughed for a bit before retorting, “Shut up, red! You wouldn’t even last a second if you tried shouting as loud as we did.”

Everybody in the room shouted cheers, while the four boys tried to catch their breath. “Oh boy 2012! I hope this year is gonna be good!” said Grimm, who was optimistic.

“Yeah, me too! I’m gonna be looking forward to having more customers than I did last year. Not saying that I wasn’t very popular, mind you,” Hachi said before drinking his fruit punch.

Andy smiled for a bit before he frowned when he suddenly had a bad feeling. He felt like this year was going to be the worse one yet, but how? Max saw the serious look on his best friend’s face and asked, “Hey buddy, what’s the matter? You look like you saw a creep just walk inside the HQ just now.”

“Um Max? Isn’t 2012 supposed to be the year when the apocalypse happens?” Andy asked. As if his saying magically cursed it, a meteor fell and struck down the HQ destroying everyone and everything inside. All around the world, meteors struck down landscapes, cities, towns, villages, forests, deserts, and etc. The apocalypse lasted for about an hour until it was finally over.

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Meanwhile on the other side of the planet where the ruined country of Rubinelle was, all the buildings in the city were broken down and destroyed as debris and dusts filled up the streets. Forests and grasslands were turned into wastelands, and rivers and lakes became dirty. Over half of the 12th battalion was wiped out along with the Lazurian soldiers. Brenner and Lin were among the soldiers, who survived the apocalypse. “Captain Brenner, are you alright?” asked Lin as she looked down at her superior who was lying on the ground.

“Yeah, I’m fine,” Brenner replied as he pushed himself up to stand. “So what’s the status report on our soldiers and enemies?”

“We’ve taken a lot of casualties, sir. But the Lazurians aren’t any better; it seems that the meteor has destroyed an entire battalion of them. I guess we can say we’ve won the battle,” said Lin.

“Well that’s tragic and fortuitous at the same time,” said Brenner.

“I know, but it’s not just the battlefield the meteors struck, it seems like other parts of the world has suffered the same fate as well. Because of this, it’s most likely the Rubinelle-Lazuria war can’t go on much longer. We can suspect the Lazurians will want to retreat and lick their wounds back at home,” said Lin.

“Then that should give us a lot of time to rescue survivors in our country. Come on Lin, let’s go bury the dead before we set out to find the survivors,” said Brenner.

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Author’s Note: Okay, I’ll admit that this story was very short and lazy. Not to mention that it was uploaded too early before New Year’s Eve. But I had to be quick about it, since that idea of making up this story just suddenly appeared in my head and I had to do it quickly before it was too late. Anyway, I don’t really believe in that 2012 end-of-the-world nonsense. I just wanted to put a little joke here and try to connect the aftermath of Dual Strike to the beginning of Days of Ruin, even though they probably may not have the same universe and all.

[Red Dragonette]

I got this prologue chapter of a FFXIII-2 fanfic that I've finished and I need you guys to review it before I put it up on Deviant Art and Fanfiction.net. It's comedic story about a young girl who can shapeshift into any kind of monster using the fragment she has with her. She's kidnaps Mog and challenges Serah & Noel to a game of Cat and Mouse, where they have to try to catch her and retrieve the fragment from her while she messes with them with all the pranks & mischiefs she pulls on them, Guardian Corps, and the rest of the populace on 488 AF Bhunivelze. Tell me what you guys think about it? Should I leave as it is or make some changes to it?

Prologue
There were eight children were playing around in the park as they smiled happy and filled the air with cheerful laughter. Four boys were playing a game called Tag as the three of them would run away from the boy who was ‘it’. Three of the girls swung on the swings as they swayed back and forth through the air. The last girl, who wasn’t engaged in activity with the others, had her own idea of what to do for fun. She was going to play a little prank on all the kids and laugh at their reactions. The girl proceeded to do the first step of her plan by crawling underneath the small cluster of bushes.

The leaves and twigs brushed at her as she moved through them. One of them even got snagged in her hair that the girl had to pull it out. When she got to her perfect hiding spot in the center of the bushes, the girl spotted a strange cyan crystalline object. It was small-sized, about 5 inches in height, and it was in a form of a goblin. “Huh? Who left this here?” the girl wondered as she was intrigued with the object. Taking an interest to the small figurine, the girl crawled over to it and picked it up into her hand. She gazed at its wonderful naturalistic details and thought, ‘Wow! I always knew goblins were ugly creatures, but this thing here is the best one I’ve ever seen. It’s so pretty, it shames all the other goblin species even more!’ She made an amuse grin on her face as imagined showing the monsters the crystal figurine and then taunting about how they look ugly compared to this, arousing jealousy out of them. She giggled at her daydream for a short bit until the figurine started to glow with light. The girl opened her mouth in surprise and murmured, “Huh?”

Suddenly, the figurine’s blue light engulfed the girl and started working its transformation magic on her. Her arms became black and metallic with her hands transformed into big balls with short circular stubs on them. Her clothes disappeared and her legs turned black with her feet turning green and black wheels appearing underneath the feet. Her skin became green and her mouth unhinged itself to become a circle with a big hole going through the body. Her teeth became fangs and a black horned cap replaced her hair. “What the?!” the girl gasped as she looked at her arms and legs in shock to discover that she has just transformed into a goblin. “Oh my gosh, I’m a monster! What do I do? I don’t want to look like this! Everybody’s going to say I’m ugly!” the goblin whined. Now she wished she hadn’t touched that goblin-like object because what if she stays like this forever? Being a butt-ugly monster was one of the last things the girl wanted in this world. “I wish I was cute little me again right now,” she said to herself. Then suddenly, the blue light engulfed the goblin and transformed her back into a human.

The girl looked at reverted self in amazement and said, “Wow that was quick!” She then realized that the mysterious object she had the power to transform her into a goblin and back into a human at anytime. She wondered if it could also turn her into other monsters as well. She decided to test out her theory by imagining herself as a gremlin. Just as she predicted, the girl changed into that monster as she became a little smaller with her arms turning into gray wings, eyes turning round and crimson, her clothes replaced by a white poncho, and her body round and white. Then she tried the figurine’s power again by wanting to be a mini flan. The girl was now a round red gooey head with a stem and a pair of leaves at the top. Finally knowing exactly what the figurine does, the mini flan smiled mischievously as she thought, ‘You know what? Forget about my earlier plan. I can make a bigger prank using this thing here. It’s time to start a scare fest all over town!’

The woman, who was the children’s caretaker and chaperone, looked at her wristwatch and saw that it was time to leave. She got off of the bench she was sitting on and called to the children, “Alright kids, playtime’s over! It’s time to go and get something to eat.” The children stopped playing went to crowd around the woman who counted each of them and see who was with her. The only one missing was that girl who crawled into the bushes out of everyone’s sight. The curly blonde-haired woman looked around for her as she asked, “Now where could she be?” Suddenly a svarog flew out of the bushes and let out a shrieking roar that terrified the woman and children. “Everybody, run to the van now!” the woman told the kids.

The children started running away as fast as they could while screaming in fright. “Monster, monster, monster!” they all cried.

The woman stayed behind to look for that missing girl as she tried calling out her name a few times before asking, “Where are you?!” Then the svarog started flying towards the woman with its jaws open to bite at her. Terrified out of her wits at the monster coming to eat her, the woman abandoned her search for the girl and ran away screaming to the van. She took out her car keys and unlocked the van to let herself and the children get inside quickly before the svarog got to them.

After the van drove away and flew into the air, the wyvern monster burst out laughing and said, “Look at them go! Running away like frightened mice with their tails between their legs. Tee hee hee!” The svarog transformed back into a little girl and she continued saying, “Having this crystal thing here sure is best thing I’ve have in my life. It’ll be fun changing into different monsters and scaring the life out of people. I bet it’ll even be useful for all the pranks I pull.” She changed herself into a hedge frog and hopped away as she said mischievously, “Now time to go find a random sucker to scare and mess with.”

[Red Dragonette]

Chapter 1
Five days later, Serah, Noel, & Mog time traveled through the historia crux and arrived in 488 A.F. Bhunivelze, where they were at a park in the middle of downtown. Noel looked at his new surroundings that had the many skyscrapers, electronic signs, and moving walkways just like Academia had, but designs and layout of the area was different. “Wow Academia, sure has changed much since we last came here,” said Noel.

But Serah looked up at the sky and saw something that wasn’t quite right. “Uh Noel, I don’t think we’re in Academia. Look up at the sky, I can see Cocoon there,” she said as she pointed to the single-holed planet far above them in the sky.

Noel and Mog looked to the sky and saw the same thing Serah was seeing. “Hey you’re right! So if Cocoon’s up there, then that must mean we’re somewhere else.”

Serah asked, “Think we’re in Bhunivelze? Hope did say that he was going to make a new Cocoon.”

“Yes, he did say it,” said Noel. Then he saw a middle-aged man walking by and said, “Hang on, let me ask this guy first just to make sure you’re right.” The brunette went over to the passer-by and placed a hand on his shoulder to stop him and asked, “Excuse me, pal; can you tell us where we’re at?”

The man turned around to look at Noel and answered grumpily, “We’re in Bhunivelze, boy! Where else do you think you’re at?! What?! Did you get your head hit by a football or something?!”

Noel was taken aback by the way the man acted and tried not to get angry as he said, “You know what? Forget I asked. Just go back to your own business.” The passer-by huffed and walked away.

Then a young woman, who was following the man, stopped by Noel and apologized, “Don’t mind my father. He’s just upset that the Monster Girl went and humiliated him in public.”

“Monster Girl? Who’s that?” asked Noel.

“Well she’s a—“ the woman said before she got interrupted by her father’s yelling.

“Veronica, quit talking to that pansy-clothes-wearing dork over there and let’s go home!” yelled the man.

Veronica sighed and replied, “Yes, father.” Then she ran to catch up to her father.

When Noel rejoined Serah and Mog, the moogle asked, “So what’s his problem, kupo?”

Noel answered, “Apparently, this Monster Girl went and messed with him. That was why he was being grumpy just now. Anyway, he said that we are in Bhunivelze. Looks like your guess was right, Serah.”

“So if we’re in Bhunivelze, then why aren’t we up in the sky?” Serah asked.

“I don’t know; I guess they’re still building it or they haven’t migrated all the Cocoon citizens here,” Noel assumed. There was no way that Hope was going move the graviton cores to Bhunivelze without having Cocoon fall from the sky as a result. The complete building of Bhunivelze and the migration of all the Cocoon populace had to come first. Not to mention that they needed to move Fang and Vanille out of the crystal pillar as well. “Anyway, let’s go see if we can find any fragments or paradoxes here,” he said.

Then they walked away from the time gate behind them and left the park. The trio came to a shopping district where Serah saw some interesting news on the giant TV screen on one of the buildings. “Noel, look!” she cried as she grabbed him by the arm to stop him and point at the news screen.

“What is it, Serah?” Noel asked before he looked up as well. “Huh?”

The thing that caught the time travelers’ attention to the news was a footage of a long gui parading through the streets with a crowd of terrified people screaming and running away from it. The headline on the news read: ‘Monster Girl pranks again’ and the voice of an unseen female anchorman on the screen said, ‘Five days ago, there had been reports of monster sightings in Bhunivelze. People all over Fusicia Town had been in panic at that various monsters they saw. Luckily and strangely enough, no one was hurt and surprisingly no attacks from the monsters, other than the chasing and roaring, have been made. All these monsters have done so far for the past few days are scaring people for fun and pulling a lot of nasty pranks on unsuspecting people.’ The footage of the long gui ended and the screen now showed the anchorwoman who asked, ‘What is the reason for their unusual behavior and are they really many of them or are they all just one? Well here comes the answer right now!’ Then a box of a smiling little amber-eyed girl with black hair styled into twin tails and a cheesy grin on her face, appeared next to the woman. ‘8-years-old Trina Miwil is the adopted daughter of the local couple who runs the orphanage. She is the mischievous shape-shifter who can somehow change into any monster she wants and then cause all sorts of mischief around town, thus earning her the nickname ‘Monster Girl’. Her identity had been discovered two days ago when local florist, Mike Gabrael, caught the girl in her human form stealing some flowers before she changed into a triffid and fled off before he could catch her. Investigators are assuming that her transformation ability is most likely a paradox. The Guardian Corps have tried to apprehend the little rascal for days, but all have failed to catch her and stop her shenanigans. Here is a story from the Monster Girl’s most recent victim of her pranks.’

The screen shifted to the grumpy man that Noel had seen earlier. “Hey, isn’t that the guy you just talked to?” asked Serah.

“Yeah, that's him!” replied Noel who was just as surprised as Serah was.

The middle-aged man on the giant screen ranted, “I was at a conference meeting and I was about to give my speech to the audience when that no good brat snuck up behind me as a lobo and used her teeth to pull my pants down right in front of the audience. Oh it was embarrassing! Everybody, including that Monster Girl, were all laughing at me. I go so angry that I that I turned on the annoying furball and tried to grab her. But she jumped out of the way before I could catch her. Then she turned into a mini flan and spit red goo at my face and in my mouth. It was nasty! I hope that obnoxious brat gets a foot up her ass, and I’ll be a lot happier if it’s my foot!”

The screen shifted back to the anchorwoman and said, “And that concludes the victim’s story. If anyone has seen the Monster Girl, please call 438-843-4475. Mr. Josh Vipperman, Trina’s father, is offering a large sum of 10,000 gil to anybody who could help bring his foster daughter back.”

After watching the news about the Monster Girl, Serah asked, “Hey Noel, did you catch all that?”

Noel answered, “Yeah that Monster Girl, or Trina, sounds like a rotten troublemaker terrorizing the city and making people’s lives miserable. It’s no wonder the old guy was acting like he had a thorn on his side.”

“I can’t stand children who behave this way; it just irks me,” said Serah disapprovingly as she never had a tolerance for naughty behavior, a disliking which stemmed from her career as a teacher. “If I ever see her, I’m going to give her a piece of my mind,” she swore. Then she calmed down and asked, “Anyway speaking of her, do you think her shape-shifting power is a paradox like the news said?"

“It sounds most likely that it is and I’m betting 2000 gil on it. It’s not every day you get to see or hear of a human who can change into monsters. Come on, let’s go find this Monster Girl and see if we can solve this paradox,” Noel said. They went from street to street as they rode on some of the electric walkways and went up & down ramps to search for the girl. After a little while, they saw the time-travelling merchant named Chocolina standing by a light pole.

“Look, it’s Chocolina! I wonder what she’s selling this time?” Serah said as she suddenly felt the urge to do some shopping upon seeing the half-human chocobo.

“Well let’s go see, kupo!” said Mog. As the trio started to approach the red-feathered merchant, they started to see a familiar black-haired girl wearing a light green & emerald shirt with a pocket at the chest, dark green shorts, and white & green sneakers. She was standing right by Chocolina, whom she was purchasing some candy from.

Serah recognized the girl’s face and asked, “Wait, is that who I think it is?”

The girl gave the gil to Chocolina and took candy from her as she said with a smile, “Thanks chocobo lady!”

Chocolina smiled back with glee and replied, “You’re welcome, little lady! And thank for you for shopping, Choco-boco-lina!”

Noel watched the young girl walk away and said, “Yep! That’s her; our paradox, Trina Miwil!”

Mog started to feel tingling sensations in his body as he sensed some kind of energy radiating from Trina. His pink crystal pompom started to shine brightly like the sun and his tiny bat-like wings fluttered rapidly as he said excitedly, “I sense an artefact, kupo!” There was no need to ask ‘where’ as Mog flew over to the lollipop-sucking Trina.

The little girl stopped in her tracks and looked up at the moogle flying around her. She felt excited to see the fabled creature in life and squealed, “Oh my gosh, it’s a moogle! And it even looks cuter in person than it does on TV. Can I have you as a pet?”

Noel and Serah ran over to the girl holding the artefact. They needed to get the artefact from her so that they could use it to open the time gate and go to other eras to solve the paradoxes. Noel asked, “Hey Trina the Monster Girl, do you have anything unusual with you like a crystalline object?”

Trina understood what he was talking about and pulled out the crystal goblin in her shirt’s pocket. “You mean this?” she asked.

Noel nodded and said, “Yeah, something like that. Can you give it to us? We need that to--”

But Trina tilted her head to the side and interrupted him as she said, “Hmm, I don’t know. I’m grown really attached to this thing and I don’t’ really want to give away something that’s been really fun to use. I mean how else am I going to change into monsters and mess with people?”

“Wait a minute, this artefact can be used to transform yourself into a monster? I thought all artefacts could only open time gates. Why does this one have a power like that?” asked Serah, who was surprised to hear of an artefact having another power besides opening its respective time gate.

“I don’t know, but hey let’s play a game! We’re going to play Cat and Mouse. I’ll be the mouse and you guys will be the cats. If you can catch me, then I’ll give you this artefact to keep,” said Trina.

“You’re on! Once we get our hands on you, you’re giving that artefact to us and you’re going to have to stop causing trouble all over town, deal?” said Noel, who accepted the challenge.

Trina grinned and replied, “Deal! Now let the game begin!” The girl gave herself a head start by running away from the time travelers and quickly transforming into an uridimmu to make herself get away faster.

Noel smirked with confidence and said, “Little does she know is that I’m a monster hunter. I should be able to track her down that easily. Come on Serah, let’s go!” Being a hunter for pretty much most of his life has made Noel an expert at tracking down his prey, so catching Trina shouldn’t be too hard, well at least that’s what Noel thinks.

“I’m right with you, Noel,” Serah replied. They both ran after the uridimmu whose fast speed was furthering the distance between her and the humans. By the time they turn around at a corner, the Monster Girl was no longer in sight. “She’s gone! Just where could she be?”

Noel walked around as he looked at the ground for clues. He didn’t need just footprints to find out where Trina went to; anything relating to the Monster Girl would help them out like the gray strand of uridimmu hair he found lying in front of an alleyway. “Over here, Serah! I know where she is, follow me,” he said. Without waiting for her, Noel ran off into the alleyway.

Serah didn’t get a chance to get ready to follow him as she was off a short few seconds behind him. She tried to catch up to him as she cried, “Wait for me, Noel!” While the duo ran through the alley with the moogle flying with them, an imp was sitting at the edge of the roof and watching them go. The imp jumped up and flapped her bat-like wings to take off after them in the air.

As she was getting closer to the trio, the imp started to feel something in her behind that needed to be pushed out. ‘Uh oh, here comes the dookie! I better push it out now,’ the imp thought. So the imp made dirt and dropped it out of the sky, but what she didn’t know is that the dirt was going to drop on Serah’s head, the girl who happened to be right under her.

Mog sensed the artifact energy above him and stopped in his place as he said, “I found her, kupo! She’s right above us.”

“Huh? Where? Do you see her?” Serah asked as she and Noel stopped running before they looked up above them. To their horror, they saw a piece of dirt falling down towards Serah.

Fearing for the girl’s well-being, Noel charged towards his friend as he shouted, “Serah, watch out!” He tackled her out of the way and the dirt on the back of his head instead. Noel groaned in disgust as he pulled the dirt out of his hair and flung it on the ground.

The imp above them giggled and said, “That was so silly! I liked how that poop fell on your head. I should’ve brought a camera for that.” Then Trina flew away out of sight.

Serah and Noel got up as the latter frowned in annoyance at being pooped on and having Trina make fun of him. Noel growled and said, “That was annoying!”

“Are you alright, Noel?” Serah asked.

“Yeah, I’m okay,” Noel replied. Then he had an idea on how to make hunting Trina easier and said, “Mog, you have the ability to sense artefacts. We need you to track down the Monster Girl for us, got it?”

“I got it, kupo!” Mog replied. Then Mog took the lead as he flew through the alley to search for Trina. The trio ran through a few passages in the alley until they made a left turn into the next alleyway which was narrower than the others. The moment they made the turn, a stink bomb was hurled at Mog and it hit the moogle square in the face. A small yellow smog surrounded the moogle as its horrid smell went into his round pink nose and burned the nostrils inside. Mog whined ‘kupo’ between his choking coughs.

“Mog!” Serah and Noel worriedly cried out their friend’s name at the same time.

Trina, in her human form, giggled at the prank she pulled before running off away from them.

The smog died out quickly and Mog began to recover. Serah and Noel glared at the fleeing girl as the brunette yelled, “Hey you, get back here!” The chase resumed and Trina transformed into a tabasco toad to jump over the high fence that was blocking the way.

The trio stopped in front of the solid metallic fence and looked for a way past it, but fence was too unclimbable and there was nothing around to help them get over it. “Darn, there’s no way around it!” Noel said.

Serah looked to the moogle and said, “Mog, you’re the only one who can fly. It’s up to you to catch her.”

“I’m on it, kupo!” Mog flew over the fence and pursued Trina. “You’re not going to get away from me, kupo! I can sense the artefact you have. As long as it’s with you, I can find you easily,” Mog said to her. Having heard the info, Trina started to formulate ideas on how to keep the moogle from tracking her down. Her first idea was to get rid of the artefact, but wasn’t a wise choice as without it, she could not transform into monsters and the ‘cats’ would easily take it. So she decided to go with the second plan: getting rid of Mog. The tabasco toad stopped fleeing and turned around to face Mog. Mog was confused by the Monster Girl’s sudden change in tactics as he uttered, “Kupo?” Trina opened her mouth and a long sticky tongue flew out to grab the moogle. Mog screamed as he was pulled into the tabasco toad’s mouth.

A short while later, Serah and Noel were trying to find an alternative route to Trina. “Mog, where are you? Did you catch Trina yet?” Serah called.

“Mog, give us a signal or something to let us know where you’re at?” Noel said. Pretty soon, they saw a svarog flying in the air. “That must be Trina. But where’s…” Noel was about ask where Mog was until he saw the moogle struggling in the Monster Girl’s jaws as he cried out ‘kupo’ many times. Instead of Mog having caught Trina, Trina has caught Mog. “Mog!” both he and Serah cried out in worry at the same time.

[Red Dragonette]

I'm doing the Red and Blue challenge from Fanfiction.net. It's going to be starring Kairi and Aqua from Kingdom Hearts. Here's my 1st chapter and theme. I need this reviewed before I put it up on Fanfiction and DeviantArt.

Envy
Kairi stared at the beautiful older girl named Aqua who was sitting on the sand of Destiny Island’s beach and watching the sun set. The redhead was not only mesmerized by Aqua’s elegant looks, but she was also envious of her beauty too. She admired the older girl’s sleek blue hair, her radiant ocean blue eyes, her kissable pink lips, her smooth & soft skin, her gracefully slender body figure, and her gorgeous clothes. Kairi wanted all that; she wanted to be attractive and beautiful just like that girl she was looking at.

Unbeknownst to the redhead girl, Aqua was also envious of Kairi. The bluenette found the princess of heart to be pretty and cute. She adored her rosy red hair, her cute face, her lovely blue eyes, and the clothes she wore made her quite appealing. Kairi was practically a fairy in human form; an adorable one.